Write prompts that convert
A pro method for briefing the AI so every email is short, specific to the lead and ends in an easy yes.
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Who this is for: anyone whose campaigns are running and who wants more replies from the same list.
The AI writes from three things: your instructions, the lead’s row and what we read on their website. You control all three. This page is about the first; Write subject and email instructions covers where each field is.
The anatomy of an instruction that converts
Good email instructions answer five questions, in this order:
- Who you are, in one line. “I run a small dental marketing agency in Austin.”
- What to notice about them. “Open with one specific thing from their website, such as a service, a new location or a review.”
- The offer, concrete and small. “Offer a free 10-point audit of their Google Business profile.”
- The ask, one easy yes. “Ask if a 10-minute call next week works.”
- The rules. “Under 90 words. No bullet points. No exclamation marks. Plain text.”
A complete example
I run a dental marketing agency. Open with one specific detail from their website (a service, a new dentist, a review) in one sentence, as if I noticed it myself. Then say in one sentence that practices like theirs often lose new-patient calls to competitors with better Google profiles. Offer a free 10-point audit of their Google Business profile. Ask if a 10-minute call next week works. Under 90 words, no bullet points, no exclamation marks, sign off with my first name only.
A subject line instruction
Under 6 words, lower case, no punctuation. Mention their practice name or city. It should read like a note from a colleague, not a newsletter.
Make the research count
- Tell the AI what to look for on the website, not just “personalise it”. “Mention a service they offer that relates to implants or Invisalign” beats “make it personal”.
- Tell it what to do when the site says little: “If the website gives nothing specific, open with their city instead.”
- Use Only email leads whose website we could read for campaigns that depend on a specific detail. See Website research.
Use the columns you have
The AI already sees every column of the lead. Point at the useful ones by name: “Use the Specialty column to choose the example you give.” A placeholder like {{city}} pins an exact value where you want it.
Put house rules in one place
Tone, banned words and the sign-off belong in Instructions for every email in AI settings, so each campaign’s instructions stay short and focused on the offer.
Test before you scale
- Use the test email preview in the wizard to read a few emails for different leads.
- Start the campaign with I approve each email first and read the first 10 to 20 emails in Review emails.
- Adjust the instructions, then switch to sending automatically.
Tip: Change one thing at a time between campaigns (the offer, the opening, the length) and compare reply rates. Changing everything at once teaches you nothing.
Patterns that hurt replies
- Long emails. Over 120 words, replies drop. Say “under 90 words”.
- Vague flattery. “I love your website” reads like a template. Ask for one concrete detail.
- Two asks. “Call, or reply, or book here” splits attention. One question.
- Hard sell. “Limited time”, “guaranteed”, “#1”. Spam filters and people both dislike it.
- Links and attachments in the first email. Leave them for the reply.
Next step
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